Tag: writing

  • How To Turn A Commodity Into A Luxury And Make More Money – An Example From Science of Copywriting

     

    Pricing has always been problematic for people. It’s the same whether we’re in business, at a car boot sale or selling to a friend.

    We get stuck in our own mental model of the world. The trouble is, the world we’re stuck in is of our own making. It’s not the same world as the one we’re trying to sell into.

    If that concept is new to you, then I’m delighted to be the one to introduce it. We truly are all different, and it’s why there’s no cookie cutter method for making money other than selling something for more than you paid for it (be it money or time).

    When it comes to pricing, there’s only two models you need to be aware of:

    1. Commodity and Luxury

    2. Essential and non Essential

    Commodities are essential. That’s why they’re commodities. Everyone knows what they are, and they also know their cost.

    Luxuries are non essential. Everyone knows what they are, but they don’t know their cost.

    The trick in pricing is to turn a commodity into a luxury, and then turn that into an essential. And the way to do that, which has never changed in the history of marketing, is to add value to the commodity you’re selling.

    This is how Ford were able to turn Mondeos into Jaguars and double the price for less than the cost in the early 2000s.

    If we take a recent example in the Science of Copywriting Facebook group, Lee Dickinson asked about proofreading fees. Now there’s a commodity in the writing world if ever there was one.

    It’s a commodity because we can all read. But it still has a certain amount of value because we cannot all spell. And that value increases further because not all of us are good at grammar (though both these values are being commoditized through apps).

    This moves the proofreader closer towards the professional end of the market, but no one’s going to get rich.

    So how can you add more value?

    First you need to do the obvious – position yourself as different from the average proofreader.

    One way to do that is show evidence you always deliver 100% error free work (even the most popular books contain typos – you can use that as a differentiator once you have a few jobs under your belt).

    Another way is to treat each job as a project rather than at an hourly or wordcount rate. That is, you talk with the publisher about expected sales (they’ll know how large the first print run will be – so they’ll have some idea about this).

    This adds a higher degree of responsibility to the task, and so increases the value.

    For example, J K Rowling’s publishers would have paid a considerably higher price for getting her last book proofread than her first book (and no doubt at J K Rowling’s insistence too).

    When you explain that you treat every project with the same 100% degree of accuracy, people who care will be happy to pay a premium for it (who wants badly proofread books?).

    Another way is to become a specialist proofreader. Pick an industry you know a lot about, and only pitch to publishers who sell to that sector. This will give you far higher status and allow you to become the player in that sector.

  • Copywriters: Choosing The Right Voice

    You can manufacture a writing voice or use your own. It’s the same for actors. Some use their own voice throughout their career (Hugh Grant, Liam Neeson), the rest choose method acting and pick the appropriate accent, style etc.

    (Meryl Streep, Christian Waltz).

    The dilemma for all new copywriters is which to choose. My recommendation would be to develop your own voice (which takes time – so be patient). Your voice becomes your USP (you want people to say “no one writes copy as good as [insert your name]”).

    However, if you develop the ability to write in many voices, then you can use that to divide and conquer markets (getting copywriting jobs is the same as any marketing exercise – it’s all about positioning you as Unique, Necessary and Irresistible).

    If you do choose a multi-voice approach, please please please never use the “corporate voice” unless you’re offered a lot of money (this is just a plea to save the rest of us from more boring and useless copy – thank you 🙂

  • Ever Wondered Why Some Writing Sucks?

    Why Some Writing Works, And Some Just Sucks

    Good writing follows a system. Mediocre writing does not.

    When you understand the system, your words land and your message sticks. When you do not, you are left wondering why your writing falls flat.

    The Simple System Behind Clear Writing

    At the core sits a fundamental pattern, Noun followed by Verb. Think, He said. Jim raged. Jane shone.

    These examples may sound a little Janet and John Kindergarten, yet they work in any context and for any audience. Start simple, then build complexity on purpose.

    Only when you master good writing, can you confidently master great writing.

    Why Noun + Verb Works Every Time

    • Clarity – readers instantly know who did what.
    • Momentum – verbs drive action, which keeps attention.
    • Confidence – simple sentences sound sure of themselves.
    • Versatility – the pattern works in fiction, marketing, and technical docs.

    What Bad Writing Often Looks Like

    • Passive voice: The report was written by the team.
    • Noun stacks: The customer experience optimization framework process.
    • Weasel words: some, various, several, robust, world class.
    • Overlong sentences: Three ideas stuffed into one breathless line.

    Quick Fixes You Can Apply Today

    1. Start with a clear subject (name who acts).
    2. Use strong specific verbs (and avoid is, are, has, does when possible).
    3. Prefer active voice: The server processed the data (not ‘the data was processed by the server’).
    4. Limit one main idea per sentence (keep clauses under control).
    5. Read aloud (if you find yourself gasping for air, the sentence is probably too long).

    Before And After, See The Difference

    Flabby SentenceSimple Noun + Verb RewriteWhy It Works
    There was a feeling of anger in Jim.Jim raged.Noun and verb, no filler, emotion shown, not told.
    The data is being processed by the server.The server processes the data.Active voice, faster and clearer.
    Our solution facilitates the optimization of workflows.Our tool cuts your workload by 30 percent.Concrete verb and number, benefit first.
    There are several considerations that must be taken into account.Consider three things.Direct subject and verb, fewer empty words.
    An announcement will be made regarding the price change.We will announce the price change.Names the actor, short and honest.

    How This Scales Across Genres

    Marketing

    • Weak: Our platform enables synergy across stakeholders.
    • Strong: Our platform connects your team in one place.

    Technical Writing

    • Weak: Errors are thrown by the API when limits are exceeded.
    • Strong: The API returns an error when you exceed the limit.

    Fiction

    • Weak: There was a sense that the night was cold.
    • Strong: The night bit hard.

    When You Can Bend Or Break The Rule

    • Passive for emphasis: The patient was misdiagnosed, the focus is on the victim.
    • Rhythm and variety, mix short and medium sentences for flow.
    • Dialog and voice, let characters speak as they would, clarity still matters.

    Break the rule, but do it on purpose. Know what you lose and what you gain.

    Mini Case Studies

    1. Landing Page Headline

    • Before: A comprehensive solution for the management of invoices.
    • After: Save five hours a week on invoices.
    • Result: Higher click through, clearer promise, stronger verb.

    2. Support Email

    • Before: Your request has been received and will be processed within 48 hours.
    • After: We got your request, we will reply within 48 hours.
    • Result: Warmer tone, named actor, fewer words.

    3. Story Opening

    • Before: It was a day that seemed to contain a quality of foreboding.
    • After: Clouds gathered. Birds hid.
    • Result: Scene moves, images act, tension rises.

    More Simple Rules That Lift Your Writing

    • Cut throat clearing – Delete phrases like In my opinion and It is important to note.
    • Prefer concrete words – Use rain, not precipitation event, use buy, not procure.
    • Use numbers – Replace ‘many’ with 12, specific beats fuzzy.
    • Front load meaning – Put the point in the first clause, support it after.
    • Keep paragraphs short – Three to four sentences help readers keep pace.

    A 5 Minute Daily Drill

    1. Pick a paragraph you wrote yesterday.
    2. Underline every verb, circle every subject.
    3. Change passive to active where it serves the reader.
    4. Swap weak verbs, like is or has, for stronger ones.
    5. Cut 20 percent of the words, read aloud, and call it done.

    Recap

    • Good writing follows a system, start with Noun and Verb.
    • Use active voice and concrete words.
    • Break rules only when you know why.

    Keep Learning

    You can find more rules in the Science of Copywriting Facebook group.